Ani May Queen

Oh, I do these things for my characters all the time, but never with this much stuff! This is great thank you so much! I think it's really important to ...

I agree that chapters should be able to be read in one sitting, unless your like me and have to sneak read in Math class... Anyways I think dividing into ...

My problem is I know certain evens I want to have happen, I just have no idea how to connect from one event to another. My advice is leave it ...

Instead of writing a contiunous story, have you ever considered writing a series of vignettes about your life? Just write down anything about your life that pops into your mind ...

Very intresting, like how the narrator is alway changing their mind. It's just like human nature to never be satisfied. The style is very good. It was a little confusing ...

Wow, that's really great advice! I didn't even think about the proofreading thing, but it makes a lot of sense. Presonly I always listen to music when writing or drawing. ...

Oh...I could do sooo many things with that "I like knifes" thing. Sadly though, they'd all would have one of my friends saying that. What does that tell you about ...

I diffently recomend listening to music. Also, just go over your work and see what needs improvement. By the time you get back to where you left off you'll probably ...

I almost always have a basic idea of where the stories going to go before I start writing, but they're never written in stone. More often than not the plot ...

Think of a whole bio for your character, even if your not going to use half the info in it. You should know your character by heart, Where they grew ...

Absolutely wonderful advise. I've heard some of that before, such as the "like your characters" and don't make them perfect stuff, but the "make them ugly" is cool. I like ...

I always look for names with a certain meaning that describes my character. For example since the name "Jason" means "healer" if I named a character Jason he would probably ...

A very nice quick read. I like the style and how you just use simple words to convey the meaning and feel of the poem. Very nice.

Woah...that's a little freaky... :shock: But very good. I like it a lot. The first part is a little hard to read, you might want to break it up into ...

Okay, at least now it looks better...